Wednesday 23 January 2013

Ghost car.

Just a short story with a scary theme. It won't keep you awake at night but it may entertain you for a while.
                                                                     

                                                                      Ghost car

   “Oh I’m so glad you stopped said the young and attractive woman getting into the car I was almost ready to go home”. The man nodded but didn’t say anything so the girl prattled on I don’t usually come out in such stinking weather, but the storm seemed to come up out of nowhere, look at me I’m soaked to the skin, the man glanced over at her and nodded again before lapsing back into quietness, the girl chattered on ignoring the man’s silence she did however notice how he was dressed in an odd way like in the pictures she had seen of her Nan and Granddad when they were on a driving holiday around Scotland in the nineteen twenties what had her Nan called them? Plus fours or something? She now remembered the car had been old fashioned as well. She put it down to him perhaps being a reenacter or something like that. The silence began to get on her nerves so she asked

“Can we put the radio on please” the man nodded and reached out to put on the radio and it came to life after a few seconds playing big band music, she recognized it from a movie she had once watched.

“So no CD player then?

“No no CD player” it was the first time that he had spoken, which was a relief because he had begun to freak her out

“I’m only out because my boy friends car broke down last night so he’s stranded in town, we’re going to the picture’s tonight and I live in the village back there so I’m going to his house to meet him, mind you if I’d known what the weather was going to be like I’d have stopped at home, mind that bend up ahead”, the man only increased his speed,

“Steady on” she exclaimed “There have been loads of accidents there”

“I know” he said increasing his speed still further,

“don’t worry he continued death is quite painless”, suddenly it all came back to her the things he had said to her, what are you doing she asked nervously still not actually frightened she glanced over at the man who was now hunched over the steering wheel, her glance took in his so out of date cloths, that and the vintage car that she was now travelling in at such an alarming speed, she gave an involuntary cry of alarm,

“relax” the man sounded menacing now don’t worry about a thing it won’t hurt a bit, I’ve been doing it nightly for fifty years now, he increased his speed still further.

The car fishtailed for the first time then it mounted the verge it never made it round the first corner of the s bend before it mounted the verge went twenty yards and ploughed headlong into a tree, as it mounted the verge the girl had put her hand on the door handle her forward velocity made the door open and she was thrown out and away from the car, the last thing she heard was a manic laugh before unconsciousness took her away, she awoke in the early dawn shivering with cold she tried to stand but she discovered that her leg was broken, there was no sign of the car or of the manic driver of the previous evening. The search party found her there at seven thirty later that morning, she was delirious and raving about a ghost that drove her of the road but they could find no evidence of any such accident!

Sunday 16 September 2012

This is a short story I wrote for a tutor marked assignment, its a simple thriller with a twist in the tail. I was quite pleased with it. Enjoy. The stories working title DI Jack Denton.

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The woman was found murdered on Boscastle harbour, a violin string around her throat, but that was this morning lets go back to last night.

  Jack was bored, hed been bored for months now he was so close to retirement, he wasnt getting big cases any more, and he lived for big cases. No, instead of big cases he had to listen to hysterical women all day moaning that they were in danger from ex boyfriends or ex husbands or even currant husbands. Most of them would be back with their erstwhile attackers as soon as his back was turned, but out of a sense of duty he logged each call, put them at ease calmed them down and made the occasional home visit.

   He had thought this was just such a case, an attractive middle aged lady the wife of a violinist in the county orchestra, who looked like he wouldnt hurt a fly

You dont know him he can turn really nasty

Im sure he wont come back tonight, he said reassuringly, he knew his appearance worked for him here, he looked like a big friendly teddy bear, or a favourite uncle, the kind who was always welcome at Christmas

  A few minutes later he was propping up the bar of a pub just around the corner from her flat, by the second whisky he had forgot all about her.

  The next morning he was at his desk shuffling papers, when he noticed the phone call received by Detective inspector  Lewis, it looked serious so he watched as Lewis put on his jacket and left the with two detective sergeants in tow. God, what he would give to be in their shoes, but he knew it wasnt to be his big cases were behind him now. The call came an hour later.

  Hello Jack this is Lewis here. Do you know a Mrs Barnaby?

Yes, I spoke to her yesterday why do you ask

Youd better get yourself down to Boscastle harbour mate.

  Soon he was in his car speeding through country lanes, feeling that subtle form of elation he knew so well. At the same time wondering what the hell was going on.

  He soon arrived at the beautiful little tourist hamlet and pulled off the road where he could see the police tape. He nodded to the uniform copper on duty keeping back the small band of the public that were congregating on the picturesque bridge over the river, he bobbed under the tape and made his way to the group of officers standing around a small heap of clothing that he knew was the remains of a human being

Allright Jack? said inspector Lewis, Jack nodded

Whats going on? he asked.

  Found your business card on this lady’s body, can you confirm her  identity?

  Yes its Mrs Barnaby. How did she die?

  Violin wire around the neck’,

  It was her husband’.

  What makes you so sure?

  Hes lead violinist in the Cornwall county orchestra, and I want in on the arrest. She was my responsibility I dropped the ball here, I want the case’.

  Oh OK Jack you get to run with it, but you answer to me

OK boss I can do that’. Just a little arse kissing was in order here. Mind you, it came hard-Lewis had been his detective sergeant for the last fifteen years. Together they had solved dozens of cases, it was this partnership that had been the reason he was so highly thought of.

  They traced Mr Barnaby to the north Cornish town of Bude. He was staying in the Royal Hotel a first rate hotel overlooking the sea. He was eating a late breakfast in the hotel restaurant. Jack went straight over to him

  Mr Joshua Barnaby?

  Yes thats me he looked very nervous. Well he should do, hed just killed his wife.

  I am arresting you for the murder of your wife.

  This has to be some sort of joke Ive been here all week, Ive not seen my wife for two.

  On the return journey Jack tried to get on friendly terms with the suspect trying to get a confession from the man.

  I can understand why you did it Joshua, I can call you Joshua?

  Yes please do

  Yes I understand why you did it she was a total bitch, wasnt she?

Well yes but I didnt kill her.

  Oh come on she had been a nightmare for years now.

  Thats true but I didnt kill her.

  Oh come on you took a strand of violin wire, put it around her neck and pulled on it until she stopped moving.

  Is that how she died? thats horrible poor Karen.

  But you know how she died dont you-because you killed her?

  No I didnt and I dont want to talk anymore, not until I see my solicitor.

  Jack gave up for now. This was his speciality, getting suspects to confess. hed been doing it for half his life now and he knew he was good at it. Hed get his man-it just took patience and determination.

  When he arrived back at the station he oversaw the booking in of the suspect and saw him safely tucked away in a cell then he went to work, where was the suspect the previous evening? What time had the victim been killed exactly? How had he moved the body? All important questions that needed to be answered. He put sergeants on to all of them, telling them he expected them to get back to him within hours.

  He didnt get answers until early evening and he didnt like them when he got them. He was just leaving the interview room after four hours questioning their main suspect, their only suspect, he had clamed up and refused to answer any questions. They needed to let him rest now, but Jack saw no problems yet-a night in prison would loosen his tongue. But his sergeants had bad news for him the woman had been killed after eight oclock he knew that he had left her about then, but before midnight, she had been driven to the spot in her own car, the car was then returned to its parking spot outside her flat. But the main piece of information was that Joshua Barnaby had been in the bar of the cliff hotel  at the time in question and he had thirty people to corroborate that fact, this knocked him back on his heels. He had been certain of the man’s guilt-he had a motive, the murder weapon so unique (a violin wire).

  He had to suspect someone was trying to frame Barnaby-what other motive could there be? Who else had a motive? He would have to go back to basics. First of all he needed to interview him again find out if he had any enemies He wasnt looking forward to that interview, not at all.

  On his way to the cells he was way laid by Chief Superintendent Regan

Can I have a word please Jack?

    Of course sir.

  Can you give any good reason why there should be one of your fingerprints on the interior of the dead womans car?

  Sir?

Im sorry but I am going to have to place you under arrest sergeant take him to booking. A Sergeant appeared by his side.

This way Jack.He took him by the arm steering him gently towards booking. There was a hush as he was led towards the front desk, and he considered fleeing but thought better of it. He was old and out of shape  and he knew he wouldnt get to the front doors. He went through booking in a daze just answering in the affirmative when they asked his name and address.

  In an hour he was in the interview room opposite Detective inspector Lewis

What made you do it Jack? He recognised the tone gentle inquisitiveness-hed used it hundreds of times himself.

   He felt nothing just regret at being caught, he thought he could beat the system, and get back into major cases.

  ‘Where did you find the fingerprint?’

  On the rear view mirror.Of course she had been such a small woman it had surprised him how easy it had been to get her into the car. She had let him back into the flat without asking him why hed returned, he’d seen the wire earlier in the evening he unwrapped it while she was making coffee then took her by surprise when she straightened up from putting down the drinks . He took the weight of her body on his as he pulled back on the string. She had only made a gurgling sound in the minute or so it had taken to kill as her he had cut off the carotid artery taking blood to the brain. She did have time to realise what was happening, and for that he felt guilt, but not much.      

Tuesday 28 August 2012

Weed. I wrote this while taking canabis for chronic back pain. It helped


WEED

By David Ball

 

Use the weed

Grown from seed

Let your mind be freed

What more do you need.

 

Use the weed

Let this be your creed

Be free from greed

Live life at a slower speed.

 

Use the weed

Pain will quickly recede

Come follow my lead

Listen as Pan plays his reed.

 

Use the weed

This is my plead,

Never do an unworthy deed

In us this idea can breed.

 

Use the weed

Are we all agreed?

Until stones bleed

Use the wind as your steed

And use the weed.

 

 

 

 

Wednesday 25 April 2012


Masturbation.

By David Ball.



The joys of honest masturbation

I recommend without hesitation,

Better than lonely contemplation

Leaving you still with an erection,

Leading to overwhelming frustration

But it ends in a life of dissipation.


Wednesday 18 April 2012


New Zealand Holiday with a twist
By David Ball



The man had had a good day right from the very start, he had woken up with an erection and his wife, out un characteristically had been happy to accommodate him, so they had the best sex they had had since there wedding night, and he’d had the most mind blowing orgasm that he could remember in years, he even took the time to bring her off as well. They’d had breakfast together on the terrace under strangely clement November weather, he had eaten everything that he liked bacon and eggs with fried bread, and his wife had not once mentioned his cholesterol. So he left the house with a big smile on his face and things could hardly get better, they did, when he stopped off at the shop to buy a newspaper and a bar of chocolate he had paid with a tenner but had been given change for a twenty, he had not realized this until later on in the day, so was unable to hand it back, but he decided he would return it the following day as he didn’t want to poke a finger in lady lucks eye.

The traffic was as easy as he could remember, all the lights in his favor and no one tried to cut him up, so he arrived at work early, he sold houses for a living, he was very good at it, his secretary gave him the look of a woman who was not getting any, but still laughed at his jokes.

When went to lunch he had asked his boss to go along with him, and he had finally got up the nerve to ask him for that long overdue rise his boss had told him he was amazed he had waited this long to ask. So not only did he get the rise but it was back dated six months.  So by the end of the week he would have a couple of extra grand in his bank account.

Which started him day dreaming about what he was going to spend it all on, he spent most of the afternoon at his desk daydreaming, he thought first that he would perhaps buy himself a new set of golf clubs, or perhaps a new car but he didn’t really need a new car and  the current one was only twelve months old, and he only rarely played golf nowadays, perhaps a holiday they hadn’t been away for a few years now, and he was due a holiday, he decided on a holiday to new Zealand, he and his wife had wanted to visit that oh so attractive island for years now, ever since watching a holiday programme  about the place, he had many a dream about the place since then, there was one particularly  beautiful long sandy beach that he had dreamed himself on more times than he could count. When he got home that night his wife had been very ’ in’ to the idea and said she would love to go to New Zealand with him. They spent weeks going over every detail of their coming holiday, where they intended to stay the hire company for the car they intended to use. They decided to stick to the north island partly because of the limited time, they only had six weeks before he had to be back to his nine to five, and partly because they believed that his dream beach was there somewhere in the mists of the north island. His boss had been reluctant to give him that long, but his good day had continued that long and he had let him have the time

So it was that three months after his most perfect day it came to pass that he and his wife came to be on a plane journey taking almost twenty four hours with a stop off in Singapore, the journey had been truly grueling but after having breakfast lunch and dinner on board they had both managed to get a good few hours’ sleep at last, in fact they slept six or seven hours out of the last ten so they were reasonably refreshed when they arrived in New Zealand. The customs had taken just a few minutes. So at zero seven hundred hours on a Monday morning they were ready to go, they went to the car hire place near the airport and hired a four by four, so at last they were there in New Zealand they had six weeks free and clear to discover all of those special little places that your average tourist misses, and began to slowly travel all the way around the coast of the north island stopping in nice hotels and eating in the best restaurants and cafes. They saw many beaches but never quite the one he had been looking for, but his heart was set on finding that one special beach he had seen on that television show all those years before. He had begun to think he would never find it and they only had a couple of more weeks to go so he had decided to start asking about the place to the oh so friendly natives. He couldn’t believe he hadn’t done this from the start, but he was giving them so little to go on, a long deserted sandy beach was all he could give them, and as he and his wife could attest to, the island was full of them, one other clue, he had an inkling it was close to a quite large town but no one knew of such a place then one night he and his wife were in a restaurant at the bar whilst waiting to be seated and he asked the question again this time to the barman and a couple of Maoris who were in the area looking for some big surf and they spoke to each other in their own language for a few seconds, and then turned  back to them and said they thought the place you want was up by Wellington, it was called two mile beach and it was popular with people from the big city who visit it for day trips, that’s probably why people hadn’t picked up on the description, they had been asking for a deserted beach when two mile beach was anything but deserted, it was only quiet at night and early in the mornings so unless they got there very early in the morning they were liable to have to share it with a large percentage of the people of Wellington, who would be there for the day.

Well whatever he was determined to be there good and early so they drove up the coast and found a small hotel in the next village down the coast, they decided not to visit it that night, but decided to wait for daybreak so they could enjoy the place at its best. They started out before daybreak to arrive before anyone else did and drove up to the unsettlingly  large car park and waited for daybreak, it was then that he decided to broach the subject of perhaps having a bonk on the beach, and he was thrilled and a bit relieved when his wife had agreed, he had rather been hoping for the best while expecting the worst, in the early morning light they set out heading for the sun carrying towels they walked for a few hundred yards then laid out there towels in a secluded spot and got down to it, it was just at that moment that he started to feel unwell his head started to swim and he felt like throwing up, within a few moments he was indeed being sick, it was projectile vomit and his wife went from disgust(he had just thrown up a little in to her mouth) to mild worry to all out panic in just a few seconds, she got on the phone to the ambulance service, all the time her husband was rolling around in his own vomit she had no idea what to do with him, then he stopped breathing and she had to put her fingers down his throat and put him in the recovery position so that was all she could do apart from wish the ambulance to get there. Soon after she heard and then saw the ambulance arrive they couldn’t do so fast enough for her, presently with her waving her arms like she was demented they were by her side and taking care of her husband, as she walked alongside the stretcher a few minutes later, she took a look around at the view, it was stunning in the daylight and she knew her husband will be disappointed to have missed it, she just hoped it was nothing serious and he would recover soon enough to enjoy the rest of their holiday.

At the hospital they said that it looked as if her husband had suffered a brain hemorrhage but they would have to do further tests.

He began to come around after a few days and at first everything he saw was like he was looking through a fog or slightly slowed down the people kept asking him rather obvious and silly questions like his name and where they were and he kept telling them his name and new Zealand, at night he was taken to a smaller ward where two male nurses kept talking to each other as if he weren’t there and doing repeated sheet changes after a few days his daughter was there, but how had she been able to afford the air fare and had she brought his grandchildren with her, he was thrilled by that possibility they would be able to enjoy his lovely beach together.

That night he was taken in to another room and asked where he was, he told them New Zealand then he saw his sister in law was there who he was estranged from, what was she doing there and had she brought his nieces over with her, they asked him again what’s your name he told them, why do you keep asking me, because we are in Coventry you never left, but he knew that was nonsense.

During the night he was again taken into a smaller ward where he was kept awake by two male nurses speaking an Indian dialect to each other,

And changing his sheets every couple of hours he woke up in the early hours.

That night they took him into the room again this time his sister in law was there but this time Joe Brand was there, well course she was she was a nurse what else would she be doing this time his brother in law was there as well,  so that meant his nieces were surely there they kept asking what’s your name where are we he was getting irritated by now so he raised his voice New Zealand he said but it came out a whisper, that day his daughter came to visit again and he told her what they had been saying to him she smiled but did not argue with him he asked her where the kids were, they were out with her husband she told him, he imagined them on the beach his beach and the idea became fixed in his mind his grandchildren were on his beach behind the hospital having a wonderful time, that evening they took him back into the room this time his brother and sister in law, Jo Brand was there along with George Clooney well he was a doctor  what else would he be doing, they asked him once again what was his name, he told them, where are we, New Zealand he replied, with real conviction, but he began to wonder if this was the right tactic and if he wanted to get home he shouldn’t tell them what they wanted to hear, that night he was taken again into the small room where he was subjected to the repeated bed changing by the two Asian nurses,  he awoke again in the early hours where he had time to think should he tell them what they wanted to hear.

But telling them what they wanted to hear was against everything he stood for not that he could remember what he stood for anymore, well later that day when his daughter came to visit bringing in his two adorable grandchildren he told her he knew they were in Coventry, and she seemed relieved by that, so she was in on the joke, she knew he was faking it to get out, although what the reasoning behind it all was he couldn’t imagine, throughout  that day he had made up his mind to tell them just what they wanted to hear.

That night when they pushed him into the room he had almost come to terms with lying to them but when he was in the room with his sister and brother in law .Jo Brand, George Clooney and this time Barbara Windsor well she was a nurse what else would she be doing, he had changed his mind and told them in a loud clear voice New Zealand.

That night in the small room when the two Asian  nurses were doing the repeated sheet changes he had time to think about what to do the next evening and he had decided to go along with what they wanted to hear. So when he was wheeled into the room and they were doing the scan on his head they asked him where he was he told them Coventry but something inside of him died although everyone in the room seemed pleased with him even Jim Dale, well he was a doctor so what else would he be doing.

Over the next few days he got used to telling the lies in fact he got to like the way he was treated by the doctors and nurses, and he loved the fact that his daughter brought him in his grandchildren to visit, one afternoon a couple of days after him switching his story.

The doctors told him that he had suffered two strokes but he had been lucky they had travelled up and down so he had no damage to his motor skills, in fact to look at him you would think there was nothing wrong with him and once he was dry at night he could go home. Well that day came a step closer a few days later when he was asking how long had he been out, about a week he was told, is that all he thought it had been months at the very least I mean he could describe the whole trip to New Zealand every detail, every hotel, every meal, every beach they had visited, he and his wife had a minor celebration the first morning where he had gone through the night dry, they went for a trip to the hospital cafeteria to have a cup of coffee and a slice of cake, he remembered he was so tremendously disappointed to see through the main doors he was in England after, and it was raining, all he had been so very sure even up until that point that they had still been in new Zealand, soon after the trip out he was allowed home.

That first night at home his wife went over the entire ordeal from her point of view, she got up that morning earlier than him and was taking him up a cup of tea when she heard him making a funny noise, a kind of snorting sound, when she got to the bedroom he had been sick and he was laying in it, suddenly he was sick again real projectile vomit and then he had begun to choke on it so she had put her fingers down his throat until he began breathing again when she had maneuvered him into the safety position, when she went down to phone the ambulance which had arrived within ten minutes which she spent going between the bedroom and the front door, she was there when the ambulance came so she was able to let them straight in, they had believed he had suffered a cerebral hemorrhage, and they continued to think the same for several days in hospital it was only after extensive testing did they come to realize it was two strokes and she had been relieved when he first came round, until she realized that he wasn’t with it at all, the whole New Zealand story had frightened her to death, until the doctors explained it was a normal thing to expect with a head trauma, and that she shouldn’t be concerned, but not to contradict the patient at first  just let him talk about whatever he wanted, so she had sat by his side day after day listening to his stories about places they had visited together , beaches hotel restaurants that she had no knowledge of all, it seemed like an age to her alone, until their daughter had come in to visit him, she had been wonderful, she had just smiled serenely when her father had questioned her about the kids having a good time on the beach, down on his beach it was always his beach whenever he mentioned it now, well it had to be his beach now didn’t it as he was the only one who had ever visited it, so now he knew the rest really he had slowly gotten better over the next few weeks he had been allowed to the hospital cafeteria for a couple of hours and when he finally got control of his bladder he had been allowed home full time, of course everyone realized that he was fibbing when he claimed he knew they were in Coventry, he told lies with such little enthusiasm you could tell immediately.

It was only when he was at home having dinner one evening, that he thought about his job what had happened about that he wondered, don’t worry about it his wife told him, your boss came in to visit you when you were still out of it and he told me not to worry he would keep paying your wages and when you were ready to come back the job would be waiting for you, that had been a Huge  relief as you can imagine, so it was that three months to the day of him going sick his doctor gave him permission to return to work, it was a bright sunny day, and he was back at work one of the first things he did was to get his secretary to book next year’s annual holiday six weeks, he intended to go visit New Zealand to see if the real place was as nice as his fantasy version had been, he suspected it wouldn’t be somehow.






Friday 30 September 2011

I love this little poem. It came to me in a rush one day completly formed, and complete. It matches my mind perfectly. Scambled.



Are you really afraid,

Perhaps you should have stayed

At home

Completely alone.



You look as though you’re disturbed,

By something you may have heard.

Or perhaps seen

What could have been.



Fear comes in all shapes and sizes,

Depending on just what arises.

Look at what has passed

The history you have amassed.



You really should stay at home,

By yourself completely alone.