Sunday 16 September 2012

This is a short story I wrote for a tutor marked assignment, its a simple thriller with a twist in the tail. I was quite pleased with it. Enjoy. The stories working title DI Jack Denton.

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The woman was found murdered on Boscastle harbour, a violin string around her throat, but that was this morning lets go back to last night.

  Jack was bored, hed been bored for months now he was so close to retirement, he wasnt getting big cases any more, and he lived for big cases. No, instead of big cases he had to listen to hysterical women all day moaning that they were in danger from ex boyfriends or ex husbands or even currant husbands. Most of them would be back with their erstwhile attackers as soon as his back was turned, but out of a sense of duty he logged each call, put them at ease calmed them down and made the occasional home visit.

   He had thought this was just such a case, an attractive middle aged lady the wife of a violinist in the county orchestra, who looked like he wouldnt hurt a fly

You dont know him he can turn really nasty

Im sure he wont come back tonight, he said reassuringly, he knew his appearance worked for him here, he looked like a big friendly teddy bear, or a favourite uncle, the kind who was always welcome at Christmas

  A few minutes later he was propping up the bar of a pub just around the corner from her flat, by the second whisky he had forgot all about her.

  The next morning he was at his desk shuffling papers, when he noticed the phone call received by Detective inspector  Lewis, it looked serious so he watched as Lewis put on his jacket and left the with two detective sergeants in tow. God, what he would give to be in their shoes, but he knew it wasnt to be his big cases were behind him now. The call came an hour later.

  Hello Jack this is Lewis here. Do you know a Mrs Barnaby?

Yes, I spoke to her yesterday why do you ask

Youd better get yourself down to Boscastle harbour mate.

  Soon he was in his car speeding through country lanes, feeling that subtle form of elation he knew so well. At the same time wondering what the hell was going on.

  He soon arrived at the beautiful little tourist hamlet and pulled off the road where he could see the police tape. He nodded to the uniform copper on duty keeping back the small band of the public that were congregating on the picturesque bridge over the river, he bobbed under the tape and made his way to the group of officers standing around a small heap of clothing that he knew was the remains of a human being

Allright Jack? said inspector Lewis, Jack nodded

Whats going on? he asked.

  Found your business card on this lady’s body, can you confirm her  identity?

  Yes its Mrs Barnaby. How did she die?

  Violin wire around the neck’,

  It was her husband’.

  What makes you so sure?

  Hes lead violinist in the Cornwall county orchestra, and I want in on the arrest. She was my responsibility I dropped the ball here, I want the case’.

  Oh OK Jack you get to run with it, but you answer to me

OK boss I can do that’. Just a little arse kissing was in order here. Mind you, it came hard-Lewis had been his detective sergeant for the last fifteen years. Together they had solved dozens of cases, it was this partnership that had been the reason he was so highly thought of.

  They traced Mr Barnaby to the north Cornish town of Bude. He was staying in the Royal Hotel a first rate hotel overlooking the sea. He was eating a late breakfast in the hotel restaurant. Jack went straight over to him

  Mr Joshua Barnaby?

  Yes thats me he looked very nervous. Well he should do, hed just killed his wife.

  I am arresting you for the murder of your wife.

  This has to be some sort of joke Ive been here all week, Ive not seen my wife for two.

  On the return journey Jack tried to get on friendly terms with the suspect trying to get a confession from the man.

  I can understand why you did it Joshua, I can call you Joshua?

  Yes please do

  Yes I understand why you did it she was a total bitch, wasnt she?

Well yes but I didnt kill her.

  Oh come on she had been a nightmare for years now.

  Thats true but I didnt kill her.

  Oh come on you took a strand of violin wire, put it around her neck and pulled on it until she stopped moving.

  Is that how she died? thats horrible poor Karen.

  But you know how she died dont you-because you killed her?

  No I didnt and I dont want to talk anymore, not until I see my solicitor.

  Jack gave up for now. This was his speciality, getting suspects to confess. hed been doing it for half his life now and he knew he was good at it. Hed get his man-it just took patience and determination.

  When he arrived back at the station he oversaw the booking in of the suspect and saw him safely tucked away in a cell then he went to work, where was the suspect the previous evening? What time had the victim been killed exactly? How had he moved the body? All important questions that needed to be answered. He put sergeants on to all of them, telling them he expected them to get back to him within hours.

  He didnt get answers until early evening and he didnt like them when he got them. He was just leaving the interview room after four hours questioning their main suspect, their only suspect, he had clamed up and refused to answer any questions. They needed to let him rest now, but Jack saw no problems yet-a night in prison would loosen his tongue. But his sergeants had bad news for him the woman had been killed after eight oclock he knew that he had left her about then, but before midnight, she had been driven to the spot in her own car, the car was then returned to its parking spot outside her flat. But the main piece of information was that Joshua Barnaby had been in the bar of the cliff hotel  at the time in question and he had thirty people to corroborate that fact, this knocked him back on his heels. He had been certain of the man’s guilt-he had a motive, the murder weapon so unique (a violin wire).

  He had to suspect someone was trying to frame Barnaby-what other motive could there be? Who else had a motive? He would have to go back to basics. First of all he needed to interview him again find out if he had any enemies He wasnt looking forward to that interview, not at all.

  On his way to the cells he was way laid by Chief Superintendent Regan

Can I have a word please Jack?

    Of course sir.

  Can you give any good reason why there should be one of your fingerprints on the interior of the dead womans car?

  Sir?

Im sorry but I am going to have to place you under arrest sergeant take him to booking. A Sergeant appeared by his side.

This way Jack.He took him by the arm steering him gently towards booking. There was a hush as he was led towards the front desk, and he considered fleeing but thought better of it. He was old and out of shape  and he knew he wouldnt get to the front doors. He went through booking in a daze just answering in the affirmative when they asked his name and address.

  In an hour he was in the interview room opposite Detective inspector Lewis

What made you do it Jack? He recognised the tone gentle inquisitiveness-hed used it hundreds of times himself.

   He felt nothing just regret at being caught, he thought he could beat the system, and get back into major cases.

  ‘Where did you find the fingerprint?’

  On the rear view mirror.Of course she had been such a small woman it had surprised him how easy it had been to get her into the car. She had let him back into the flat without asking him why hed returned, he’d seen the wire earlier in the evening he unwrapped it while she was making coffee then took her by surprise when she straightened up from putting down the drinks . He took the weight of her body on his as he pulled back on the string. She had only made a gurgling sound in the minute or so it had taken to kill as her he had cut off the carotid artery taking blood to the brain. She did have time to realise what was happening, and for that he felt guilt, but not much.